Hand Washing – Changed

Further Feedback

After hand in we had further feedback that gave us an outlook of the whole project and how to improve from both the clients and the tutors. The feedback on my final project was that the word danger felt like a negative word and didn’t really fit the place this poster would be used for. I think that the original use for the word danger was the idea that they seen this word and knew that this task was needed to stop the danger. I think that I will use this feedback and change the word to make it more light-hearted. The use of the colour black was also something that was mention felt that it didn’t link to the other poster even know I was told to change the colour from green to black by my mentors. I then was told that the size of the poster was ambitious enough and didn’t work to grab people attention.

Reflecting on feedback:

I felt that the feedback was fair and that there was a lot more work that could be done to allow this project to work well. I think that the main point was changing the word danger I think I will try and find another word that doesn’t seem as harsh and maybe just used the word germ. I think that the background change will have to be a light colour that works with the poster to give it a light-hearted feel. I will also look at changing the size by making 4 posters that include each step being A1, A2 in size to allow it to be large enough to get the point across that these steps need to be read and paid attention.

Improved Poster

This is my updated version of my poster following feedback. I have changed it a lot and given it a comic strip feel to it. I have updated the text and changed the colour and size. These will be A2 poster that can be displayed in a long strip or as two posters depending on the space in the workplace.

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How it would work:

This is my updated version of my poster following feedback. I have changed it a lot and given it a comic strip feel to it. I have updated the text and changed the colour and size. These will be A2 poster that can be displayed in a long strip or as two posters depending on the space in the workplace.

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